ext_2499 ([identity profile] houseboatonstyx.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] shewhomust 2010-07-07 05:05 am (UTC)

One or two details might tip a reader off to a period and setting that she was already familiar with. But a reader visiting that period for the first time, may need those details in a more, er, detailed context.

Some readers enjoy an exhaustive description of a modern woman's ball gown. But imo the effect of a gentleman wearing "shoes with high red heels, a purple cloak, a purple and gold coat, a flowered silk waistcoat" goes way beyond that, in several directions. This is definitely not a gentleman of Kansas!

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